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Okay, I lied about not posting this.
I'm just asking for some legitimate feedback, please. I know the eyes don't quite line up, or at least the pupils, and the mane needs to be a bit... poofier? The bottom of the tail ain't right either :/ The neck's a bit long, too.
I just want a lil bit of feedback like that.
I'm giving this to my sister on Tuesday. It's A2 in size, roughly.
But yeah, if you can give me just a couple of pointers for improvement then I would massively appreciate it <3 I'm not looking for critiques as such, just... words of advice.
MLP:Fim (c) Lauren Faust
Reference Image Used - images4.fanpop.com/image/photo…
I'm just asking for some legitimate feedback, please. I know the eyes don't quite line up, or at least the pupils, and the mane needs to be a bit... poofier? The bottom of the tail ain't right either :/ The neck's a bit long, too.
I just want a lil bit of feedback like that.
I'm giving this to my sister on Tuesday. It's A2 in size, roughly.
But yeah, if you can give me just a couple of pointers for improvement then I would massively appreciate it <3 I'm not looking for critiques as such, just... words of advice.
MLP:Fim (c) Lauren Faust
Reference Image Used - images4.fanpop.com/image/photo…
Image size
2048x1536px 853.74 KB
Make
ViviCam
Model
ViviCam
Shutter Speed
10/199 second
Aperture
F/3.2
Focal Length
7 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Jul 12, 2012, 4:18:45 PM
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Vision Originality Technique Impactoh wow i'm posting an actual critique this is rare
first of all you did really good on the hair, and the eyes. which is pretty difficult to get on the first time. so good job.
as for critique, i know legs are hard af to do, but they're a bit longer. and maybe make the back legs a little more far apart and more curved? same for the spine, Lauren Faust's lines are always really smooth and have a lot of curvature. and for they head, make it a little thinner so that it's basically a circle.
but I guess since im lame and watch this show a lot i notice stupid little details about the structure of the ponies so im sorry if i like bombarded you with critique hahah. im always really harsh too